I feel like
I am sinking
deeper and deeper
I am gasping for air
I am clinging to an iron rod
My heart is in my throat
I open and shut my moth
I yearn for a life
But all I feel is death
Life is a roller coaster with its ups and downs. Be strong, don't let the gusty wind blow you. Use the wind to take you to the sky.
09 Mar 2015 23 Comments
in depression, poetry Tags: air, death, depression, gasp, mental diseases, poetry, prisoner, sinking
Tokoni O. Uti
Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:25:11
Be strong. Life will get better. Prayers for you. Very expressive poem.
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bariyah faisal
Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:30:36
Thanks Tokoni. I will try to be strong 🙂
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Tokoni O. Uti
Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:30:59
Reblogged this on Beautiful Insanity.
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ashleyjbarrett17
Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:53:11
Stay strong life can only go up for you. Read my last blog I hope it gives you some comfort
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bariyah faisal
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:15:11
Thanks. I will read your blog 🙂
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jackijons
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:22:47
Depression is an awful, awful thing. I feel your pain.
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bariyah faisal
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:26:21
I hope you get well
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jackijons
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:38:58
you too…
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mrsmrobinson2014
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:27:11
It s not always easy to put words to a depressed state. Thank you for sharing. It s difficult but you re not alone. ❤
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bariyah faisal
Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:29:23
Yeah it is very difficult. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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Autumn Leaves
Mar 09, 2015 @ 15:30:14
hang in there. someone will throw out a lifesaver for you, soon. 🙂
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Anonymous Aesop
Mar 09, 2015 @ 17:25:59
Are you reading my mind? Hahaha.. I yearned for a life but I now feel so alive.
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shaheensdarr
Mar 09, 2015 @ 22:53:51
Life is beautiful and short, so many blessings around, I see them everywhere I look, sending you good vibes x
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bariyah faisal
Mar 10, 2015 @ 06:30:42
Thanks for the positive vibes.
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gabriel360live
Mar 10, 2015 @ 02:34:20
Beautiful poem. I can totally relate.
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bariyah faisal
Mar 10, 2015 @ 06:29:21
Thank you 😀
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Zed
Mar 10, 2015 @ 15:09:47
That feeling is so hard….that strange life-sickness feeling. Keep someone close when you feel that way (I know advice is not usually helpful, but friends do matter), and well, take care. Hugs…
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bariyah faisal
Mar 10, 2015 @ 21:44:47
Thanks for the advice 🙂
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aanchalmohan
Mar 11, 2015 @ 23:49:59
Just wrote a post about happiness, you should go through it. Might help! x https://forgotteneveryday.wordpress.com/2015/03/11/happiness-is-a-mood-not-a-destination/
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bariyah faisal
Mar 12, 2015 @ 11:11:37
Thank you for sharing this 🙂 I will read it.
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alfgarnet
Mar 17, 2015 @ 20:49:57
You got the words and feeling down Exactly, thanks for shareing, take care be safe
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bariyah faisal
Mar 18, 2015 @ 00:45:42
Thank you 🙂
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alfgarnet
Mar 18, 2015 @ 00:48:35
Your very welcome x take care be safe
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