My depressed state

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I feel like

I am sinking

deeper and deeper

I am  gasping for air

I am clinging to an iron rod

My heart is in my throat

I open and shut my moth

I yearn for a life

But all I feel is death

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23 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Tokoni O. Uti
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:25:11

    Be strong. Life will get better. Prayers for you. Very expressive poem.

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  2. bariyah faisal
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:30:36

    Thanks Tokoni. I will try to be strong 🙂

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  3. Tokoni O. Uti
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:30:59

    Reblogged this on Beautiful Insanity.

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  4. ashleyjbarrett17
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 12:53:11

    Stay strong life can only go up for you. Read my last blog I hope it gives you some comfort

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  5. jackijons
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:22:47

    Depression is an awful, awful thing. I feel your pain.

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  6. mrsmrobinson2014
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 14:27:11

    It s not always easy to put words to a depressed state. Thank you for sharing. It s difficult but you re not alone. ❤

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  7. Autumn Leaves
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 15:30:14

    hang in there. someone will throw out a lifesaver for you, soon. 🙂

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  8. Anonymous Aesop
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 17:25:59

    Are you reading my mind? Hahaha.. I yearned for a life but I now feel so alive.

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  9. shaheensdarr
    Mar 09, 2015 @ 22:53:51

    Life is beautiful and short, so many blessings around, I see them everywhere I look, sending you good vibes x

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  10. gabriel360live
    Mar 10, 2015 @ 02:34:20

    Beautiful poem. I can totally relate.

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  11. Zed
    Mar 10, 2015 @ 15:09:47

    That feeling is so hard….that strange life-sickness feeling. Keep someone close when you feel that way (I know advice is not usually helpful, but friends do matter), and well, take care. Hugs…

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  12. aanchalmohan
    Mar 11, 2015 @ 23:49:59

    Just wrote a post about happiness, you should go through it. Might help! x https://forgotteneveryday.wordpress.com/2015/03/11/happiness-is-a-mood-not-a-destination/

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  13. alfgarnet
    Mar 17, 2015 @ 20:49:57

    You got the words and feeling down Exactly, thanks for shareing, take care be safe

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